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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-07-12 08:14 AM


Just beyond the morning
In a land of chil and black
A soldier gaurds his lands
On a horse of deaths own black

I a stable in the courtyard
where a ragged jester plays
Lives the king of fools presiding
over horses, insects and hay

A lonely chorus wailing
to a deaf king on the throne
Not even cats hear there calling
To a king carved in stone

The magic in the twilight
Calling all to stay
Just beyond the morning
In the land without the day

Beneath the blacksmiths rusty hammer
Sparks the gold of Elven Brood
From which they shape their armour
For fighting the armies of good

In the tavern beer is flowing
As the night is always young
And the parties always growing
For no Morning brings the Sun

In Barracks Knights and squires
Are preparing for the dawn
when they can ride into daylight
And battle back to dawn

In the churchyard
Sits an old man
A preist and son of god
Praying for peace yet not sparing of the rod

Avermore is golden
Avermore is grand
In Avermore the Sunlight
Never falls upon the sand

The darkness trapped forever
In the eternal night
Avermore is lost
Avermore dead with spite


Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling
From glen to glen, and down the mountain side
The summer's gone, and all the roses falling
'Tis

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-12 09:53 AM


Avermore is golden
Avermore is grand
In Avermore the Sunlight
Never falls upon the sand

The darkness trapped forever
In the eternal night
Avermore is lost
Avermore dead with spite
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walter this is great...seems like forever
since you've posted one of your weaves of fable...
i like the cryptic darkness of this one
and now Im on to the next one  
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-12 11:03 AM


Beautifully told, feels like you were there experiencing it. A past life perhaps?
Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-12 11:39 AM


This poem has a nice flavor....mythical and omnious. Great job!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Traveller
New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 6

4 posted 2000-07-12 11:52 AM


Positively beautiful mystic tale penned here. You got my vote.

Traveller



[This message has been edited by Traveller (edited 07-12-2000).]

Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 2000-07-12 03:50 PM


An interesting vignette... like the visual!  
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