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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Somewhere in my broken heart lies the memory of our love A love that knew much and asked little Somewhere in my broken heart speaks the voice of our love A love that sang the song of life Somewhere in my broken heart dreams the nights of our love A love that was filled with passion Somewhere in my broken heart wishes the days of our love A love that knew only you, only me Somewhere in my broken heart touches the face of our love A love soft and gentle, tender and new Somewhere in my broken heart holds the warmth of our love A love that heated the coldest times Somwhere in my broken heart cries the tears of our love A love that can't seem to be Somewhere in my broken heart mourns the death of our love A love that I wished could be Somewhere in my broken Somewhere in my broken Heart. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Ouch. Broken heart is mended when one lets out the pain. Good way of describing.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Crack...the sound of my heart breaking reading this..I can feel this in every way. Beautifully expressed. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Im so sorry for your broken heart,what a beautiful poem, well spoken, from the heart no pun intended. Very very nice!!! |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
"Somewhere in my broken... Somewhere in my broken.... Heart........" Sven- Wow! This poem made me cry! It was touching....beautiful! I wish I had written it! You should have warned me before I read it- so I could have gotten a box of Kleenex! Really wonderful! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Most excellent (yeah, I know, bad grammar). I really enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . . Xeonox, thanks. . . you're right. . . catalina, sorry that you can relate, but thank you for your words. . . Deborah, thank you very much. . . Wren, my friend, next time I shall indeed warn you before I post another one like this. . . so you can have that box ready. . . thank you. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ok.....so I am brain dead!!!! I read this yesterday and totally forgot to post! LOL Never said I was bright... This is a greatly penned poem Sven, but I think I like your happy and romantic side better. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful piece, Sven. jwesley |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Somewhere the answer to all your prayers is waiting, somewhere the lady of your dreams is waiting, somewhere happiness is waiting, somewhere peace is waiting... etc. Sven I really liked this one and felt your pain. As usual great stuff!!  *Namaste*I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Romantically sad, but true. So many go loving without knowing that they are loved by someone out there. --the little one |
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