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crucifix kiss Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 14uk |
With your plastic idol in your dirty hands, kneel down and worship your god, respect his power for he is always right. Keep your secrets locked up along with his reasoning do not tell a soul, or they'll take you away, and keep you away from mummy for you are always wrong. Your innocence is all he has and he can rock your world, but all he does is rock your bed do not run. He will always see, and find you just bury your head in his arms and let him be your protection. "and as it was with all things, we spoke in rhyme and riddle. Not for fear of detection, for that had happened very long ago, but rather that those wh |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
CK..very powerful and moving account here. Disturbing imagery. I've heard this story many times in my counseling sessions. Thanks for sharing. Hardrock |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
accept god as you have accepted his gift and all will go well. Great poem. |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very Disturbing Poem. Terrifying in its intensity. Well done. Deepak Menon |
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crucifix kiss Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 14uk |
thankyou friends "mascara sure and lipstick lost , glitter burend of restless thoughts , of being forgotten" -smashing pumpkins- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
An account of things some of my friends have endured, so horrible..very emotional poem, but a good job!!! |
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