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Window Dreaming....... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Sitting by my window Gazing at the sky Noticing the stars As I let out a "sigh" My thoughts go wild As my dreaming begins Of my soul mate to enter And for me to finally win To win in the world of love Holding the man of my dreams Kissing his soft lips Reality ... so it seems Waiting for him to come home Pacing till he enters the door Giving him all I have Loving him to the inner core Walking down the street Holding his hand so tight Whispering to myself... "GOD this feels so right!" Sitting by my window Gazing at the sky Noticing the stars As I let out a "sigh" .........  ........Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
No replies? Yuck...I hate seeing good poetry go to waste. Once again you've written an excellent piece here with plenty of emotion. *sigh* The dreaming...haven't we all been there? Don't worry....he'll come to you when you least expect it.  Keep them coming!Angel< !signature--> Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
DKW...Nicely done! Hang in there, it will happen when you least expect it...it always does. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww,...you have written well of your window moment. Soon,...DKW,...soon. Such a longing flowing from your words. Thank you for sharing this little piece of you. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Where would we be without hopes and dreams, I loved this, and I think its healthy to have that dream...hold on it will happen!!!!! Nostalgia is like a grammar lesson...You find the present tense..and the past perfect "Anonymous" |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...well done...As Rex said...it will come, just when you least expect it. Hardrock |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Good poetry never goes to waste...it's always there and this is good poetry. And love is there alright, in you. If you truly don't have someone, somewhere,(which is hard for me to comprehend) as the comments sugguest, then don't look so hard as searching will often hamper your vision. Love in a person is like a magnet to others...bide your time. jwesley |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
many a night did i stare out my window at the stars. wanting and praying for my love to walk threw that door and make the darkness of the night turn to day. to take away the pain caused by nights of tears. but alas i am just a lonely dreamer. i loved the part about finaily winning. i think that all the time. when will i finialy win in life. it will come for both of us my friend. juat a matter of time *hugs* Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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