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The Sands of Wren--Challenge #3
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The Sands of Wren--Challenge #3 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Grains of colored sand Wouldn't it be great if this Cape Cod beach was filled with Different colors of sand? Think of the pictures I could paint. . . Make the beach look like something out of La Blue Girl. . . the sand my pallate Or maybe like the Beatles John and Paul in sand, at the mercy of The wind and the ocean. . . shifting . . .changing. . . Reminds me of the time I tried to make A soy pop tart. . .just could never get The frosting on there right. . . But that's ok. . . I ike strawberry the best Sitting here, painting my shoes with nailpolish People ask me why I do this I tell them it's because I want them To know what color my toenails are And wearing these shoes, they can't really See them very well. . . Do you like the color? Grains of colored sand. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my goodness Sven,...how cool this is. It's dreamy and light and yes,..I dig it. That whole nailpolish part,...right on!!! *Grains of colored sand, The Beatles, soy pop tarts and frosting, and the nailpolish!!! Yes!!! I like your colors. *Peace. *Ok,ok,..I get it,...the challenge,...WOW!!! You have written amazingly of our friend Wren. Hooray....I am sooo impressed. ~Wren,...love your colors.  . *Peace.*How 'bout doing one on little 'ol me??? May be too much work,..hahaha. Take care. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Sven- Thanks so much! I love what you did with this poem! (I feel special, I've got my own poem!) I'm amazed at how you took all the weird parts of my life and made them sound oddly beautiful!(I don't think I could make my life sound as pretty as you did) This poem is great.....Once again...Thank you sooooooo much! -Wren  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That you've made Wren happy makes me smile! {~,^} I believe this was a challenge well met... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Cursing makes me feel ignorant but oh well...this was a kick ass poem! lol I just loved it...everything about it was just perfect. Sometimes I let loose and write stuff like this but it never comes out this good. That's why it stays locked away in my journal....they're secrets better left unsaid. Angel< !signature--> I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Spitfire, glad that you liked, and I shall try to do my best with a poem for you. . . Sunshine, you're welcome, happy that I could make you AND Wren happy. . . DE, I don't think that you're being ignorant! Let it out!! lol Thanks for your words, and why not bring one of those out of your journal?? I'd love to see one!!Wren, you're welcome my friend. . . so glad that you liked. . . thanks for the opportunity to take this little look into your wonderful personality. . . and thank you for the challenge. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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