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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
A glow in the dark of majestic energy Storming in with Magnificent mounts Passions drifting down Drawing together time and space A moment of creativity By Ghost Lovers |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deb, I'm not sure I quite get this one. Enlighten me... Beautiful words.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I got it....I just don't know how to explain it. I guess I could "feel" this poem...and somehow it makes sense to me. Weird sensation. I liked it. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Hi Catalina, its a feeling poem, nothing quite "tangible" "ghostly" you might say, glad you enjoyed the verse though |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This one calls to mind (for me) a kind of spiritual high, a feeling of union with nature, inspiration. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well ghostly certainly fits! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a tanglemeant of mist in a ghostly form. enjoyed this very much and hope to see more I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Hmmm...a new concept. Love beyond the grave. I love it!!! --the little one |
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