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insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014


0 posted 2000-07-09 04:42 PM



Unbalanced Chemistry

I is crazy
You know my way
Impure and hazy
I'll ruin your day

Unbalanced chemistry
I shouldn't be free
Nice manners a trick
Death comes quick

I bump into you a sweet stranger
We are both unaware of your danger
I'm innocent of this trap
When you least expect I will snap  

In this mind
No remorse of a kind
I'll be your friend
Right to your end



[This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-09-2000).]

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-09 05:01 PM


I recommend 50mg of thorzine.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-09 05:14 PM


~Seems Prometheus is the Passion's Pharmacist,...he's recommended Dramamine for me and now 50mg of thorzine??? for you?  Hehe.  Anyway,...Insect, seems like you are enjoying exploring your "dark" side. Hehe,...I'll be on guard for your unexpected snap,...wait a minute,...did you say snap???  Oops. hahaha.  This is very creative and evil sounding. Great work. See ya 'round. *Peace.
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-09 09:00 PM


Hey, Promethus...you bring the Thorazine, I've some some Stelazine, Vistaril, Buspar and some curare...we should be able to slow him down.  Great job, Insect.  You really captured the edge-of-psychois mind.  Hardrock
jennie may*
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122

4 posted 2000-07-09 09:59 PM


eerie poem...somehow it reminds me of my ex boyfriend...
Sigmund Freud
Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 38
Come to my couch...
5 posted 2000-07-10 01:04 AM


I'm recommending straight jackets for all, and a very nice padded play room.

Freud

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

6 posted 2000-07-10 01:14 AM


Here they come the men in white
To take me away with out a fight
Pump me up with a drug
I'm horizontal like a rug

I is happy, I've made new friends
They'll stick to my side right to there end
How nice of them to give me a hand
And this beautiful jacket and shiny wrist bands

Thanks for the room "I love the padding"
Where I lived was a sad thing
Abandoned cars of the rich
Cardboard boxes in the ditch

Before you leave I have an itch
This jacket is tied a tightly stitch
See you tomorrow
Bring no sorrow

Checkers we'll play
I have all day
Play a game and again
My hands are tied you move the men

I'll wait here for you
And could you bring some gum to chew


Prometheus…thanks I had a good laugh!

SpitFire…Love you to death! Thanks

Hardrock…Your no soapstone! Thanks LOL

jennie may*…Glad he's your ex…Thanks



lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
7 posted 2000-07-10 11:37 AM


Wow. Great. Just the subject-matter I love! Keep them coming!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


kat
Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

8 posted 2000-07-10 10:35 PM


You is crazy
sometimes it's true
Unbalanced chemistry?
I doubt that's you

As far as you snapping
I believe you've done that alot
When you bite into your sweet stranger
The stranger being all those Kit Kat bars you got

But I sense you need a pick me up
It's a feeling that I get
And I hope it's just your poetry
Because I'd hate to see you upset


Great writing insect!
Hope everything is fine  

kat

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

9 posted 2000-07-13 12:19 PM


lotharingia…Thanks for visiting!
                      Care for a game of checkers?

kat…I is fine!
         You got any gum?
         Great!! Now could you just take the wrapper
         off for me?
         Come visit again sometime I'm gonna hang
         around for a while!!

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
10 posted 2000-07-13 04:32 AM


Can't play that.
Nor chess.
Nor scrabble.
Nor poker.
Only tiddly winks. And I don’t know how to spell that!  


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


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