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sash
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since 2000-06-22
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0 posted 2000-07-09 12:00 PM




Believe in Me
I'm the one who is there for You
All of My life
is a softly said prayer for You
When You are sad
I'll be Your sounding board
Fighting Your demons
with this mothers sword
Live Your life stongly
courageous and true..
Don't fear
Your Mother will be there for You


© Copyright 2000 sash - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-09 12:12 PM


Brings a tear to this Daddy's eye.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
2 posted 2000-07-09 06:13 AM


This is beautiful. A mother's emotions expressed so well.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
3 posted 2000-07-09 06:32 AM


a beautiful poem on the nurturing instinct.

"The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave


taramw
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since 2000-06-08
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4 posted 2000-07-09 07:12 AM


A beautiful touching poem    Enjoyed it very much.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-07-09 08:58 AM


Very nicely put expression of the love we have for our children, and in my case, my 4 year old granddaughter brings this exact same feeling.
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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6 posted 2000-07-09 10:39 PM


~Even just the first line itself is beautifully strong.  This poem is so wonderful and full of calming, encouraging, comforting, and powerful words. Aaah,...very nice.  Think I got enough in there? haha...seriously though,...all of those fell out of me after reading this a couple of times. *Peace.
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