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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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What should I do with these unfelt emotions? Should I yearn to feel them? Should I care? What will I say to the one that feels them? Could I agree? Would I lie? Sweet eternity is calling me, Forever sweeps me off of my feet. Rose petals line the walkway to his heart. Unfelt emotions? Should I deceive? Maybe I'm not deceiving him... Are they unfelt?? Perhaps it is me that I'm deceiving. [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 07-08-2000).] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Powerful poem!  Very good indeed. Speaks volumes! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Open up your heart...and perhaps you will feel the sheer magnitude of your feelings! like the last line muchly...implies that the girl is perhaps feeling a lot but is hesitant to admit them to herself Nice touch there  |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Well put! The feelings in the unfelt! Deepak |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you so much. I appreciate your caring comments. I do feel for someone...and I have yet to discover how much... TX again...Jenn |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jenn I really like the way you expressed this. It's not always easy to know which way to go with feelings. All I can say is if you feel love for someone, let him know. If they don't want it, then they lose more than you. And if they do, look how much you both gained. Good luck. And as I have the privelege of always taking the wrong path in love matters, I probably should not advise anyone. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Is that what cold feet feel like???? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Very well put, Jenn. Perhaps you are thinking ToO much and should just try to follow your intstinct? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sweet eternity is calling me, Forever sweeps me off of my feet. Rose petals line the walkway to his heart. really enjoyed this poem, thanks for sharing. "The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well my dear friend i hope that the best things work out for you. cause i know you and your a sweet and kind person. and you should get the best. as to the poem it was great and i wish the best things for you. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SlyOne Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 16 |
Very good Poem......Makes us all wonder what we really feel inside....May happiness find you one day soon..... |
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