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Words For Alison

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G. A. Webb
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since 01-21-2000
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Stanton, California, USA


0 posted 07-07-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for G. A. Webb

I sit and think of what to convey
While I watch the boats float by in the bay
It really is a beautiful day
Though I'm stuck at work, I hate to say

Alison I have a thing or two
That I would like to say to you
With all of your adventures and things you do
Remember one thing, always be true

Sometimes life's hard and down right tough
And the road ahead may still be rough
But negative feelings you must now slough
So keep your chin up and don't sweat the small stuff

Some dudes are cruel and some are coy
Find yourself a man and not a boy
For if you're merely just a toy
It is your love that they will destroy

So live your life and have some fun
And enjoy your moment in the sun
Just don't forget dear Alison
Always finish what you've begun

G. A. Webb



Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

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G. A. Webb
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1 posted 07-07-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Ok, this is the one I wrote for Alison, Amber's roommate. Like I said, it's more or less advice from a friend or brother. I hope you like it.  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't



[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 07-07-2000).]
Rex
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since 06-29-2000
Posts 484
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2 posted 07-07-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Rex   Email Rex   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex's Home Page   View IP for Rex

Very nice......and wise words they are.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-
Deborah1
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since 06-22-2000
Posts 659
New Hampshire


3 posted 07-07-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for Deborah1   Email Deborah1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah1

I agree, very encouraging words, its wonderful to get good advice when people care about us, nicely done!!
lotharingia
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since 06-04-2000
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saarbruecken, Germany


4 posted 07-08-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

What a lovely poem to write for your friend! I'm glad she liked it!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

G. A. Webb
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Stanton, California, USA


5 posted 07-08-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Thank you all, I'm glad you liked this piece. I think this piece could apply to anybody, male or female, I just happened to use a female as my subject matter. As far as these being wise words, I don't know about that. I consider them to be more like common sense.

Anyways, thank you all again. I look forward to reading more of your works. Take care!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

maddorani
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Posts 419
houston,tx


6 posted 01-15-2012 08:07 PM       View Profile for maddorani   Email maddorani   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maddorani

i love it so much it feels like im the girl in the poem instead! its like u could write what i feel cuz i can relate to it.
 
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