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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-07 12:22 PM


The sheet is blank whereon I dreamed
With eager hand to pen,
The lyrics of a singing heart,
Again and then again...
Yet on this virgin page is penned
No word...still startling clear,
On its white surface...glistening there...
My story in a tear!




© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
1 posted 2000-07-07 01:32 PM


Wow! I think one more word might have ruind this piece. This is perfict! Bravo Rex!  

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
2 posted 2000-07-07 02:30 PM


I agree with G perfect Rex, you certainly coloured this page.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
Posts 128

3 posted 2000-07-07 02:50 PM


Rex, superb piece! Tears are a small reminder or very large amounts of emotion.
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-08 04:22 AM


Another beautiful poem. Perfect description.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


demoninlove
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since 2000-02-11
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Dehradun
5 posted 2000-07-08 09:16 AM


Superb Rex!!!
Deepak


Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-07-08 04:51 PM


Loved this!!! Well done, says alot here, enjoyed very much!!!
Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

7 posted 2000-07-08 09:46 PM


I have to say, I really loved this....
The word choice was great....I adore the last line!

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
8 posted 2000-07-10 05:20 PM


What can I say?  Nothing.  You said it all.  Hardrock
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