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Timothy R Cox
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 5
Wheatland WY USA

0 posted 2000-07-07 01:45 AM


Strange to see as it comes to an end
This live disappearing as a thief of the night
Aviolent storm of emotions
Wreeking havoic as hope is swallowed hole
The bitter end seemingly nears
For you could not beleive
This man is far to good to be true
Lose, and inadiquitacy devoure my heart
As your heart and mind question each other
Yet alas onto familiar ground I tred
As time passes, pastures grow greener
And this love we had turns into
Faded dreams....

© Copyright 2000 Timothy R Cox - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-07 02:00 AM


Time dulling the ache of loss...
very nice


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-07 02:27 PM


I felt that..Alas onto familiar ground I tred. Very nice poem, lots of feeling.
Catalinamoon

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-07-08 05:49 PM


As your heart and mind question each other..Oh how often the heart and mind disagree..Very nicely put!!
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