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White Dove said "YES
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White Dove said "YES |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
In the still of the night with darkness all around. The moment of my freedom is complete, and light abounds. The moon is crescent shining upon a still lake. The winds talk to the pines, with a lover’s song in take. With a lover’s song in my heart, I turn to White Dove in her flight. Singing in chorus with the wind’s adoration of lofty pines in sight. Upon steady breath the question asked will you be mine for all time. Will you love me, as much as I do you will you love like the wind does the pine. With deep thought and steady voice White Dove turns her flight to land upon my brow. Saying I have loved you forever and always will I will fly with you my wolf, forever and now. We saw the darkness disappear as the sun peaked over the hills The most beautiful morning in my life White Dove in my arms, my heart thrills. So sound the trumpets, and bring out the band sound my lover’s heart song throughout the land. She (White Dove) has landed within my heart, I’m whole now with my love in an open hand. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Please Don't think this White Dove is this same one in passions, so many have, I have called my true love White Dove long before I came to passions. -------------------------------------- To all my friend in passions, who have witnessed my saga of lost/found love with White Dove, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. To those that had baby sat me through hard times, hard nights, and have watch me ?? fall apart with ?? uncontrollable emotions, a special thank you, to list you all would be to much, to list you at all would be to little. Just to make it clear, White Dove has said she will marry me, for all time. And that she has loved me always, she just had to see how much, and without a doubt. We will be married before 2001. Again Thank you. Joel the wolf. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
JOEL! THAT WAS SO....Ahhhh, words can't describe. I may as well give up now hehe  That was so, amazingly...romantic and....AHHHH IT MAKES ME WANT TO CRY!! YOU GOT MY VOTE |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"And Joel fades back...White Dove is running, dodging all...Joel the Wolf heaves his heart, giving his all, knowing that the clock is ticking...his heart is up, up, spiraling toward White Dove...will she catch it, WILL SHE? SHE DOES!!! WHITE DOVE HAS CAUGHT JOEL'S HEART!!! SHE SCORES!!! Joel the Wolf has won the game!!! The fans in Dark Passion's Stadium go wild. Joel the Wolf runs to White Dove. Enthusiastic fan, Hardrock, joins them in the end zone...does his crazy legs dance, screaming, "You da man, Joel. You da MAN!!" What a game, folks. What a game!! And you were all here to see it in beautiful Dark Passions Stadium...where hearts are won and lost, but everyone goes home a winner. Congratulations to Joel and White Dove. Hardrock. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Joel, Im new here and though I didn't know about your heartache, I would have offerred any support I could. When I read this, I thought oh a beautiful love story....And now its THE REAL THING!!!!!! I am so so happy for you, from the bottom of my heart!! Oh and Hardrock, you are tooooo much, loved that little gig, Im right there too, you are a "team" of your own and hit home some incredible stuff!! Listen everyone I hear those wedding bells, time for a big congragulations!!!!! |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I have tears in my eyes. This is quite possibly the best poem I have seen from you. Notwithstanding the fact that it is so wonderful to finally see that you are together again with your Dove. Congratulations and hugs to you. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
may my heart melt with and for you my friend. i wish you all the hope and now you have what you wanted for all time. i am so very happy for you. and about the poem it is also great do keep it up my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
I can add nothing of substance to what others before me have said, save that I wish you and the one you love all the happiness that you may gather together. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ditto Rex, Joel. Great piece. I know your White Dove has to be extremely pleased with it and you. Good luck through all you both encompass. jwesley |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Joel,...if I were there right now, I'd take your hands and do my big huge Congratulations dance with you. It's really silly and you have to be smiling and laughing the whole time. Those are the rules. Hooray!!! I really can't explain how happy I am that you are happpy, but I'll try and show you  !!! If I could measure it in height,...it'd be up to the bluest sky...right now. *Sigh*...I may just have to do the dance alone and make believe that you are here. haha. Oh,...and this poem is just the greatest,..really, I am just so overwhelmed with the news that it's difficult to focus. haha. Awesome!!! Love ya, ~Spit. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Joel, I am SO thrilled for you, this is so wonderful, I can't tell you how much joy I just felt when I read that post. So true love really is out there, eh? Can you send some this way?? Again so happy for you and your lady, and I hope it is the most wonderful miraculous love for all time. PS The poem was great too. Luv ya Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Joel... Wow that is so wonderful! I wish you two all the best!  Your poem describing the moment is just so beautiful! It gave me chills, good chills my friend! haha A truely great poet you are! Cyndey ;o) "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your tenderness and patience are your greatest strengths. No one deserves this more than you do. Love, Kathleen Kathleen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Joel this is a beautiful lesson for me to see you stand strong for the woman you loved and now she has acknowledged your love and devotion. Congratulations to both of you. James |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is very deep, thought provking and lovely poem my friend. God has given you a gift and I thank you for sharing it with us. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
CD. thanks, and yes it was romantac, I had four candles going, that I had made. The cressent moon was shining on the lake, the wind was gentle but blowing, she was in my arms, we were in my van it's a large van with a bed in the back. the stars were out by the millions with the milky way across the sky, I had some red wine the smell of the pines drifted with the wind into the van, I had been massaging her legs, she works two jobs, and I'm a massage therapist, that helps. haha So thanks for the responce. Hardrock, what can I say, the game was played open and farely, and yes she caught my heart, and we won the game. Deborah1 thanks, and yes it is the real thing. haha Portia, you are a love of mine, don't cry, unless it's of joy. Send me an E. JJ, thanks man, i'm so tired tonight,I've got to go to bed now, I'll finish responding to all in the morning. Rey, thanks man. Jwesley, Dito to you guy. really I thank you. Spit, haha I'll do that dance with you some day, and I thank you for all the nights on ICQ and keeping my dreams alive. love ya kid. Cat, If I could send this true love to you I would kid. cyndey, thank you I'll take that wish, and chills. haha Kathleen, you are a wonderful person, and have also baby say me in many a nights of lonelyness, and I thank you so much, yes it seem's that my patience has payed off. James, thank you My standing has felt week at times but with friends here in passions I have weathered the storm. Xeeonx thank you, I belive god gave me a way to White Dove, and the support here in passions < !signature--> I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Joel This is so beautiful. I almost don't know what to say. I'm so happy your love and patience has paid off. All the best God bless my friend Sylvia |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Joel, I am so happy for you! This is a breathtaking poem and I wish you an eternity of happiness together! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Joel - how wonderful! I'm really glad for you! How terrific! I'm so glad everything is working out! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Let this Love fly back to the top on the wings of a White Dove...James |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Joel I am so very happy for you, never give up hope ...thats what you have taught me, thanks for sharing your poetry and your life with us and CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
"And you shall bless darkness as you would bless light" In the search for the light of White Dove you have blessed our darkness. "And if you could hear the whispering of the dream you would hear no other sound." Devotion: Wishes True for you both. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
As most of you know I've taken a break in passions and have missed the crashes, My time has been taken up with day to day work. and I've been working on children's books. ------------------------------------ Sgraybe, thank you so much and I know you have seen this saga unfold a long time. and God bless you also. lotharingia, Breathtaking, yes for me also. I with patience have joined with the love of my life, it will be forever! taramw, yes it has worked out, and I thank you. James, your too much my friend. StarrGazer, yes I have put my life here on the block of passions, so to speak. and it has paid off. Patience is one of my virtues I do have, spelling and punctuation I don't, as has been pointed out. Nancee, I do hear the whispering of this dream, and no other sound. Thank you for the blessing. To all thank you again. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Hi Joel i am so pleased for you happiness and love are all that really matter. mere words can never truely express the feelings that you must be experiencing no matter how good a poet you or I are or can ever come close. Wishing you Happiness and long life Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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essenceofangels Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36 |
What a Beautifull poem absoulutly grand! stay healthy and smile! essenceofangels |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Joel (Online Dad) I am sooooooo happy and thrilled for you hon. What wonderful news. I knew your heart and you took the chance and it paid off now you reap a lifetime of rewards. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm simply jumping up and down for you hon. *hugs* P.s. I had to reload icq again so we'll have to reauthorise each other soon. Missed you too.. Thanks for the ecard for my birthday too!! *hugs* Love ya Dad! :0 Isis I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
it is only fitting that such a ray of light in others lives finally receive his own!! my soul rejoices for you, my friend!! man, i am so happy right now. you must be on cloud nine, joel the great!!! i love you. you were one of the first ones to make me feel i belonged here. something tells me you might feel the urge to post in a room of a lighter type!!!!!!!! i can't wait to read about love and its flight in your life!!!!! it gives me hope!! i wish you and Dove the blessings only God could bestow. peace, forgiveness, and joy. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Good,Joel,good luck! The fullness in the heart, The peace in the mind. The hope of how it will be, The faith to make it so. All of this I wish for you!! Click |
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