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ChibiDeathscythe
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0 posted 2000-07-06 02:11 PM


Then, as if the next breath he drew would be his last
he looked at her perfected, disillusioned
face and could see the memoirs of her past
the years that went by much too fast

She gazed back at him and in her eyes
reflected a heart that under her heated stare
would melt like ice and quickly die
he surrendered hopeful, then and there.


They die tonight, and though they both know it,
they do nothing to stop, and do not show it,
she sadly asks him to share her hearst,
he agrees, and together they share their first
kiss and loving, warm embrace,
and gaze upon each others face
as the sea sweeps upon them like a thief in the night,


They die without putting up a fight.


© Copyright 2000 Mary K. - All Rights Reserved
ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
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1 posted 2000-07-06 02:13 PM


Yeek! I made a few mistakes I think but oh well O_O;;;;;;;;
allan
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since 2000-04-09
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2 posted 2000-07-06 02:27 PM


Interesting (and very dark) poem Chibi. It reminded me of a song by a band called The Blue Oyster Cult called 'Don't Fear The Reaper' - one of my all-time favourite tracks. I liked this - a gothic masterpiece...

Ällän

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