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Jeremiah Johnson
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0 posted 2000-07-05 03:15 PM


first so you understand this right its not about God or anything. its man makeing himself who he is today. from what we buy and such. and also the way we acted. so try to understand please.


We created the race, the world, every boy and girl.
Even though life stops when bones chill death is not what kills.
Life is about each of us so people must learn to trust and understand their fellow man.
Cause we built life with our own two hands.


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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lotharingia
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1 posted 2000-07-05 03:19 PM


Jeremiah, an excellent piece, and how right you are. If we couldn't be bothered to understand each other, why bother at all?

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


ChibiDeathscythe
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since 2000-06-09
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2 posted 2000-07-05 03:21 PM


Even though life stops when bones chill death is not what kills.


How very, very true....

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3 posted 2000-07-05 07:28 PM


You get right to the point, don't you my friend?

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2000-07-05 08:45 PM


Love this one, as usual Jeremiah



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

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