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tearsinheaven
Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 18


0 posted 2000-07-05 12:09 PM


Please let me die (die)
I'm a disgrace to all human kind
I drove you away (away)
I couldn't make you stay
Please let me die (die)
Help me break free of this sorrow

chorus:

If i die, don't take me away
If i live, don't make me stay
What goes up must come down,
All good things must die
love is a tragedy and friends never last
I fear the future and regret the past

Please leave me alone (alone)
Please stay...away from me
All i do is hurt you (hurt you)
All i do is cause you pain
please leave me alone (alone)
You don't deserve the pain

chorus:

God will help me (help me)
He will surely set me free
God will let me die (die)
God will let me fly away
God will help me (help me)
God, let be with you!

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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-05 02:46 PM


~I fear the future and regret the past.....Wow!!! What a line.  Heavy stuff here.  Take care. *Peace.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-07-05 03:56 PM


i feel this to a subperub extent. this is a great piece and i really enjoyed it. do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

3 posted 2000-07-05 09:23 PM


Great stuff!! I would really like to hear it put to music! Hope to see more....


       ~Sash~


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