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Fix Me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Fix Me Mommy, fix me please. The world is after me again, and I can't make it stop. Where did my friends go? Why am I all alone here? Mommy, change this for me. I can't reverse the clock, I can't make myself whole. They promised they'd be there, They said they wouldn't leave me. Mommy, make them stop lying to me. You always said you would help me, You're supposed to kiss my boo-boos Please heal me, make it all go away. Mommy, love me please. Yell at them for me, make them change. Everyone wants me to ache, mommy, they all want me to ache. I don't want them to hurt me anymore. Why won't you fix it, mommy? Can't you fix it? Why do you want me to do this all by myself? Why can't you make it all stop spinning? You say it will all get better, when, mommy, when? Written for my best friend, dedicated to anyone who's felt betrayed and alone. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
An awesome expression of helplessness. I am impressed! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
The inner child, crying out. Excellent, Jenn. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well theres alot of questions here i hope they all got answered and help for you friend. as for the poem its great in your own way. i feel the message is the best part at least for me. well enjoyed the read and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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