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Girl from my dreams #2

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Jeremiah Johnson
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0 posted 07-05-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

   Today i had a dream of her
     But today it was real
I called her up and talked to her
  Now i can't express how i feel
as i was talking my feet became weak
            Then
      i could not speak
  My legs i could not feel
  But with that i can deal
         I will pay
To even just say hi and bye
     For this dream girl
             Is
The only girl worth being my prize
   well at least in my eyes.


This is another one for my dear friend Jenn which is now on here. though its not one of my best i wrote it real fast after talking to her and chose not to edit it because it just came from my heart so i hope you all enjoyed.


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

© Copyright 2000 E'Val - All Rights Reserved
lotharingia
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1 posted 07-05-2000 03:04 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

That's a really sweet poem and your friend is very lucky to have it written about her. And don't edit it because it's perfect!  

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


2 posted 07-05-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Hi Jeremiah, I agree, that was sweet, and perfect as it is.
Hardrock
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New Hampshire, USA


3 posted 07-05-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

Jeremiah...have you ever thought how many girls would love to have a guy write poetry to them...and to know they have that effect on him?  Jenn is lucky to have you as a friend.  As for the editing...I always say, "Writers write, editors edit"... nice job.  Hardrock.
SpitFire
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4 posted 07-05-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~What a sweet talking guy. hehe.  Love this and it's raw honesty.  It's lovely.  *Peace.
ChibiDeathscythe
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5 posted 07-05-2000 02:42 PM       View Profile for ChibiDeathscythe   Email ChibiDeathscythe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ChibiDeathscythe

I Loved this, especially the end! You are a true to life poet.
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6 posted 07-05-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xeonox

My dear friend, you are giving me the run for my words. Your poetry is awesome.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
DJLI
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since 06-21-2000
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7 posted 07-06-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for DJLI   Email DJLI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DJLI

as always, wonderful poetry...keep up the great works, I look forward to reading more and more

-by the way, the best things come from the heart.


if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.
Portia
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8 posted 07-07-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Portia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Portia

I love the sentiment expressed in this. I think everyone here knows I am all for a good love poem   That feeling that you would do anything for a look, a glance, just to be able to talk... oh yes. Well done.
taramw
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9 posted 07-07-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for taramw   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for taramw

Woah Jeremiah! What a wonderful poem!  Expressed perfectly! :0)
Jenn Cirrincione
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10 posted 03-16-2001 03:57 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

Oooops, wow, I was looking through your old stuff and I just realized I've never replied to this one. I'm such a dork!! Jeremiah, you're a really great guy, and the fact that you wrote for me means so much... good luck in the army man!!

Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia


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