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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-07-04 10:12 PM


I remember you in this evening’s mist,
You pass me the ever-proverbial glance,
Taking me aside you remind me of good old times,
You retell the tale of my first step and my first kiss,
Engage in this conversation ever so immensely,
That no notion of time passes us by,
Recollections are shared, and feelings are felt,
Emotions are churned and the mind is moving,
It is great to see you again my aged comrade,
I go about my business never thinking of you,
But I do take time to ponder, to think of the good old times,



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
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1 posted 2000-07-04 10:23 PM


Xeonox...Very well put.  This validates my thinking, as an "Aged Comrade", that even though my young friends don't always keep in touch, they still remember.  My revenge for being neglected is to remind them each time I see them.  Great stuff.....Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-07-05 02:56 PM


this is great though i'm still young i to have people that don't keep in touch with me anymore since i changed schools and such. the only one that has is my aged comrade John Demeter my best friend we've been through it all. enjoyed the read and do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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