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It Doesn't Matter
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It Doesn't Matter |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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She has a birthday coming, How she is looking forward to the day, One of those special days in the year, A day of happiness spent in a special way. He doesn't condone it, Says it's a waste of time and money, That she is merely immature or greedy, It's just another day. Circumstances have been tough lately, All the more reason to celebrate, A day of surprises, love, friendship and laughter, A day of happiness, she can't wait! But he seems determined to let her down, He hasn't arranged a special outing, For she is merely a clown, But even clowns can cry. So it'll simply be one small gift in the morning, That and if she is lucky a 'Happy Birthday' wish, She deserves so much more than that, Happiness again seems out of reach. Those that care will show their love, In some special little way, But from the one who means the most, Her birthday will be just another day. It hurts to know he doesn't really care, For he believes he does, It hurts that another birthday, Will pass with her feeling unloved... But it matters, so much more than he realises, Any day a chance to celebrate, Is a day that should be welcomed, And used to it's full advantage. It does matter, It is important to her, So it should be to him, She wants her share of happiness.. It matters, it does........ |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Of course it matters. Birthdays are a celebration of the day some wonderful person entered this family of people. But as you said...it's important because it matters to her. Well done....well said. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh hon, that was sad, and I have been there many times. Men often don't understand how important the special times are for us. If he doesn't appreciate you we do.. It was a beautiful poem too, and if I misundertood the meaning, sorry. I am giving it my own meaning, cause I have felt that way so many times, and will again next month on my birthday. Catalinamoon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Hardrock and CatalinaMoon. She is partly fictional, how we all feel when a birthday is unimportant to those around us. We do tend to feel childish etc. but we shouldn't. The feelings are real and they do matter. Anyones' birthday should be special, it doesn't mean diamonds or even a party, just to know you are loved and appreciated, that is never too much to wish for. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, you know in your heart that it matters deeply. . . it matters to her, it matters to us. . . She will know soon. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven, do you presume??? Thanks  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well let tell you all something it does. i'm 17 born on 1-12-83 and my little sister was born on my birthday when i turned fifthteen so it does matter and i feel it every year cause its not my day anymore i have to share it but i love my little sister and i can handle it. this is a great poem and i love the questions you ask. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
oh Isis hon, what a sad poem. It really does matter, and maybe "he" will smarten up and show through in the end |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~It does, it does, and your poem speaks to me,..I understand completely what you are saying and it does matter. Expressed well here. Take care Isis. *Peace. |
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