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Desperate Cry
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Desperate Cry |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
A typical, hopeless, anxious day With no control of thoughts Life just seems to spin around And tie me up in knots. My thoughts run rapid, my feelings spin It's all just one big fog Every day the same old thing My mind and I are lost. If I could I would make the pain end There's only one way out Not a glimpse of hope's in sight Again my life's in doubt. Who do I turn to and who will care That I'm afraid to live? Doing the best that I can do But nothing's left to give. Hear me now, my desperate plea There's no more room to cry I want to end this raging storm And live; but shall I die? ____ _ | __\_\_o____/_| <[___\_\_-----<----------<sheriliegh@sprint.ca>< |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I will keep responding that there is a brighter side even when we cannot see the light. I just hope you find that place. (((well wishes))) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
another great piece of work from you. i love this work of yours so much your a great writer and i do hope you keep it up. but i also do hope your life gets better. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
This happens to be the first poem written by you that I have read - but having read it - certainly not the last. This is lovely poetry, well structured,meaningful and leaving us with a question none can answer. Well written! Deepak Menon |
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