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Dark Poetry #2

Demon memory

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-07-04 09:27 AM

(for Hardrock

)

Wispy fragments
Of some bottomless tragedy
Drift and weave through
Fleeting dreams
Tumbling
Freezing
His illusion
Of joy
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Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

[This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 07-05-2000).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-07-04 10:05 AM

illusion of joy...Sad isn't it?
Much feeling expressed so well.

"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

2 posted 2000-07-04 12:45 PM

I know when something we want or need is out of reach, thats the hard part, very well written!!

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-07-04 01:59 PM

I hereby claim this poem as mine...It's only right since it was written about me. You don't even know me...and yet, you know me so well Uta. Absolutely loved it.....Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-07-05 01:00 AM

i to enjoyed this very much. its so packed with a force that can only drive us insane. keep it up my friend.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

5 posted 2000-07-05 05:46 AM

Thanks all!

Marvin, I'm sorry to hear this poem is about you! You poor thing! *sniff*
However, you're welcome to have it, and I'll write for Hardrock under it from now on!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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