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Ode to a Lonely Puddle
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Ode to a Lonely Puddle |
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Kezza New Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 1 |
ODE TO A LONELY PUDDLE Has anyone ever Ever stopped and admired That very lonely rain puddle Which now stands in your way It sits there all alone Either getting bigger With every drop of rain Or it just slowly fades away It is never treated with respect Or at least admired from afar No, we just walk or jump in it Just to amuse our simple minds Some of us walk over it Not because we respect it But basically because of they way we are We just don't want it to ruin our day So next time when it's raining Find one of those lonely puddles And stop and think of what Of what that lonely puddle's life is like It could resemble yours! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes it could my friend. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Hmmmm I find myself telling kids stop jumping in the puddles your shoes will get wet, but they see the enjoyment f that lonely puddle, I liked this one |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i rather trickey poem but the end answers it all i love how you make like a person life thats i think is the best part enjoyed it much and do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Love the title,...love the concept,...cool poem. Take care. *Peace. |
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