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The Heaviness
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The Heaviness |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
it's the rain in your hair when you walked me out to my car that's what I remember... it's your voice and how much it sounded like mine your dark eyes and how I swear I knew them before I knew you it's the weight the heaviness of each day I awake without your love |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jennie....another great poem. Great visuals here. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jennie, this is great. Few words with a strong emotion. Heaviness of being without someone you love, a great way to put it, and so true and painful. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i voted to let you know this is very good and well enjoyed. do keep this up i like all of your work and try to read as much as possible. so do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
The title is great, it is a very heavy feeling to not have someone you love with you. A great experssion Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Jennie Superb work, such feeling. Keep it up. Sylvia |
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