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sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125


0 posted 2000-07-03 11:11 PM




Tiniest fingers clutching My hand   Your life slips away.
like the wind-swept sand.

Will You remember the Love
  that we shared?
I tried to find strength,
  but in turn was so scared.

My small ray of sunshine,
  an angel so dear.
I long now to join You
  and hold You near.




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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-03 11:56 PM


Sash...you write so deeply....and with such emotion.  I hope through your writings you can release any pain you feel....if just for a little while.  I care.....Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-07-04 12:49 PM


i also care about you and i voted for this. as i know you are kind of new but so far all i have read is very good and i enjoyed the read very much so do keep it up. were all here for you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-04 07:10 AM


This is so terribly sad! Is it based on your experience? If it is, I do hope you are ok! Loss of a loved one is surely one of the worst things that can happen to us. I wish you all the strength you need both now and in future! Look after yourself.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
4 posted 2000-07-04 09:40 AM


I know, I know. but what to say....
  Good writing   THANX!

Click



sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

5 posted 2000-07-04 05:48 PM


Thank You All,
for the loving support you give...I miss my son, Logan, dearly...A true sadness that, with the help of friends, will serve less pain as the days go on...My Angel will never be forgotten through heartfelt words.

       ~Sash~

Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
6 posted 2000-07-05 12:17 PM


I both feel and share in your pain.


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2000-07-06 07:38 AM


Sash, I am so sorry for your loss. I know there are no words to make it better. I care too.
Catalinamoon

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