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Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-07-03 10:31 PM


I see lovers strolling
hand in hand
Or kissing softly
Their attention not swaying
It makes me long
For such affection

Is true love just a whismical thought?
Is there any truth in fairy tales?
Or has Hallmark made off with Miser's Gold,
Like a bandit in the night?


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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-03 10:35 PM


I don't have a clue, Cyndey....wish I knew for sure.  Then I could deal with these feelings...great poem.  Hardrock
Cyndey
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-07-03 10:38 PM


Hardrock...
well, I suppose we all question that, uh? I wish we only knew... I've heard there are a few lucky ones out there in the world who have experienced "true love", but sadly, I've not joined their ranks as of yet... Glad you liked the read... thanks man..  
Cyndey


"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-04 12:27 PM


yes i to enjoyed this very much and my hope goes out to you and i hope you find that true love that your looking for and hopefuly he'll have all the answers you need.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-07-04 12:31 PM


Cyndey, my answer is yes, there is true love, although its real hard to come by. And do we know it when we find it? Does the other person? Or can it slip by on a dream? I don't know, but I believe its there somewhere. Hallmark may have lied to us a little, and Disney lied even more. But its there, I know it. Maybe not one true love, but a series of many small loves, that in restrospect coulda, shoulda..
Anyway, I likes the poem. Philosphising after midnight is dangerous for me.



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-07-04 10:10 AM


Yes kid there is true love, some of us find it some miss the boat. And some of us are blind!

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Cyndey
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84
Arkansas
6 posted 2000-07-04 10:14 AM


Thanks guys...  I'm not about to give up the search though... Its...He's ...out there somewhere..
Cyndey


"All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream"
Edgar Allan Poe

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