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Cold Pizza and Heartache

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Hardrock
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0 posted 07-03-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Hardrock

Remember folks....you heard it here first.  Country music radio stand by.

Cold Pizza and Heartache

Cold pizza and heartache,
Thatís all thatís left of you.
I canít drive past a Dominoeís,
Cause it only makes me blue.
I used to be so happy,
When our love was true.
Now, cold pizza and heartache,
Is all thatís left of you.

I sit here, alone each night,
And stare at my litttered floor.
Itís filled with pizza boxes,
Left over from the night before.
I loved you and pepperoni,
And I thought you loved me too,
Now, cold pizza and heartache,
Is all thatís left of you.

So Iím eating cold pizza and heartache,
Iíve gained a hundred pounds.
I donít have call in orders any more,
They just bringíem when making their rounds.
Itís the only thing I have left to love,
Six toppings and a cheesy goo,
Now, cold pizza and heartache,
Is all thatís left of you.

Marv Hardin  07/03/00


© Copyright 2000 Marv Hardin - All Rights Reserved
sash
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1 posted 07-03-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for sash   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sash

Being from West Virginia, I can really appreciate the "twang" in those lyrics.
Thanks for making me giggle!  


     ~Sash~

Jeremiah Johnson
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2 posted 07-03-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

well i hope you recover from this pain soon. and i don't like country music but for you i can stand it. LOL. just playing. enjoyed the read keep it up my friend.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Hardrock
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3 posted 07-03-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

Jeremiah....I don't like country music either...especially this kind.  But my mind has a mind of it's own sometimes....and this is what pops out.  I'm sure you can understand that.  Thanks....Hardrock
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The Shores of Alone


4 posted 07-03-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

And my dog ran away, and my truck broke down...
Very cute, but serious stuff underneath. Haven't we all sat alone eating cold pizza and missing someone?



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy
lotharingia
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5 posted 07-04-2000 06:18 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

Sad but tongue in cheek, Marvin. Brilliant as usual. Funny how a bit of humour can highlight sorrow.
PS this sounds like a song!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Joel the wolf
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6 posted 07-04-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Joel the wolf   Email Joel the wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Joel the wolf's Home Page   View IP for Joel the wolf

I saw a T-shirt this weekend that said,
"The fastest way to a womans heart is through her ribs."
With pizza. haha ok I'm having fun to.
Because I had pizza last night and the night before and the night before, etc,etc.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
Rodney Belcher
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7 posted 07-04-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Rodney Belcher   Email Rodney Belcher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rodney Belcher

Yes catalina...I think we all HAVE sat and ate cold pizza and thought of someone...btw hardrock...Alan Jackson is on the phone wanting to buy the rights!...LOL
Rod


Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney
Rex
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8 posted 07-04-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Rex   Email Rex   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex's Home Page   View IP for Rex

Very good Hardrock! Send that over here to Houston and you can bet it will get airtime!

Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love?


JOY 14
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9 posted 07-04-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

What to do with minds that have minds of their own, huh?   I enjoyed this as a poem, but if I ever heard it as a country song I'd have to turn it off. Lol!

Joy
SpitFire
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10 posted 07-06-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~I'm sorry,...I know it's sad but I had to chuckle,..it's cute.  Sad, but cute too. Cold pizza and heartache,...boy, *sigh*.  Oh, and yeah, I can TOTALLY understand about your mind having a mind of it's own. Hehe. Take care you. *Peace.
Wren
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11 posted 07-06-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Wren   Email Wren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wren

You have a talent for humor! But all humor is serious underneath. We've all been there,I know I have! Very good work! I enjoyed reading it!
jwesley
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12 posted 07-06-2000 11:15 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

I dunno 'bout country, it sounds more like Applachian Hill Billy to me(hee hee). Good read...enjoyed it hardrock, remember me when you make your riches.

jwesley
Jesse Jaymz
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13 posted 07-06-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Jesse Jaymz   Email Jesse Jaymz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jesse Jaymz's Home Page   View IP for Jesse Jaymz

great job.  i liked this alot.  counntry??  yes.  funny???   yes.  but true??  very.  i have spent many a night eating cold pizza and playing my guitar missing the one i love.  great work.

Do you bury me when Iím gone? Do you teach me while Iím here? Just as soon as I belong, Then itís time I disappear...
MetallicA "I disappear"

Jamie
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14 posted 07-07-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

I don't feel so bad about the one I wrote now. Of course I don't have the courage to post it here...lol
Actually that would probably get air time, if it has a catchy tune. Just add a good hook for the refrain.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Irish Rose
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15 posted 07-08-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I loved this!

Kathleen
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16 posted 07-09-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Excellent poem!
Fun read thanks!
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17 posted 12-07-2012 02:10 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

This made me laugh when I needed to laugh.

Thank you.
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