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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
If I were to reveal myself.. Relinquish whats inside If I unwrap this entity How would you perceive me If I remove the camoflage Would I pose a threat to you Confessions that shed my mask Would this hinder our love If I present this offer Could you reciprocate Take personal inventory Introduce me to you Can we compose a symphony Synchronize our theme Can we endure... Our confessions |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deb, I love this. Past experience tells me the answer to your question is no. No confessions. They come back to bite you over and over.  "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Ah but ladies I have found to be an open book is better, and that I am. no secrets of any kind. So the answer is yes open and let it lay where it will it will be you, love or not. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deborah...my read on this is, "If I confess I love you...." Confess sins of the past? Never, except to your creator. But to confess your inner soul, your yearnings, your desires, your love.....most definetly yes. Jeremiah is not the only hopeless romantic. Loved it.....Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
hey hardrock i'm a dying romantic not a hopeless one. Just kidding. well anyway i do love your work here and as hardrock said your not alone and nither am i. so if you ever need anyone to talk to i'm here for you just email. enjoyed the read thank you for posting it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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