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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I saw you then I knew I would your playful smile is weaker now your sapphire eyes are greyer now you're still down where you never should have gone and yet you'll be forever in my dreams because you've always had that hold on me that only first love could < !signature--> Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooooh,...how that lingers. I hear you loud and clear. Awesome poem. *Peace. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This was a quite nice poem. Is it based on any past experience? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Loved it, very meaningful. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
No one ever quite forgets their first love...even when time and fortunes change. This short poem spanned a lifetime...and did it so well. Thanks, Uta......Hardrock |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
No one ever quite forgets their first love...even when time and fortunes change. This short poem spanned a lifetime...and did it so well. Thanks, Uta......Hardrock |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Nice one Uta. Thanks. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God My first love what a woman. haha I was eight years old, she was nine. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i enjoyed this very much as i do all your work and i do hope you keep it up now and always. i'm happy to read your poems because they always have so much meaning in them so please do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
What once was... (the mind lingers) |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
What once was... (the mind lingers) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Thank you, thank you!  , glad you all liked it!Fractal007, "a quite nice poem" what superlatives  . Seriously now, this one is based on experience. I was in love with one and the same boy from the age of 12 until about 20, when I didn't see him anymore. He didn't make anything out of his life I'm afraid; he took the alcohol, drugs and no work option. I saw him again on a recent trip to my home town, as I had expected I would (he had moved away, but somehow I knew he was back there). He looked a wreck, still a real punk at 30 (in the subculture sense), drunk at 4 in the afternoon. And yet still handsome somehow. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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