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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-07-03 10:45 AM


BY YOUR SIDE:

I am just myself
I cannot be another me
Thrice taught, once rebelled
Founded, essence, in tranquility

The strength of me lies in you
The 'other' held nearby
Gradually, sensing grew
Of feelings known as mine

My heart to yours replied
But another is by your side

© Copyright 2000 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-03 02:50 PM


Oh God Sylvia, me too...
Love the way you put it.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-07-03 09:49 PM


God this one hurts Beautifuly.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-03 09:52 PM


Many will be touched by the words and meaning in your poem.  Great job....Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-07-03 11:56 PM


yes i agree many will be touched cause i know i was. love your work and i hope you do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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