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There's an Edward Scissorhands in every one of us
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There's an Edward Scissorhands in every one of us |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
There's an Edward Scissorhands in every one of us, and though we don't like it, we can't do a thing. We live our lives everyday and struggle for something, but for most people out there we just don't mean anything. And because we're different and rarely understood, we get ostracized for it even though we shouldn't-- So we shut ourselves, 'tis redemption and solace we seek. We dream of dreams--unforgotten ones-- where we are no longer freaks. But who's more human here? I beg of you, make me understand-- Is it the normal ones without any hearts or the ones with scissors for their hands? |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
moshpit....so well put. I felt this way for so many years...in fact, I still feel this way at times. Loved the analogy to ES....also one of my favorite movies. Like the way you think. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
That was a very moving poem, and I also loved the analogy. Ed was truly one of us... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Here, here,...I too like the way you think. Mmhhmm,...very good writing and thought provoking poetry. The end just sums it up so perfectly...Is it the normal ones without any hearts or the ones with scissors for their hands? Gosh,......wow!!! Damn. Enjoyed. *Peace. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Ok...have to admit...at first just the curious nature of the title drew me in...how could someone make a meaningful poem with a title like that?...but you did it...excellent job on the analogy and observation of "human nature" Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
It is the ones with sissors for hands. I know it. A gem of a movie, and a gem of a poem. I liked a lot! Joy |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Damn now I'm going to have to rent the damn movie again. love it the first time and yes the scissors. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes a very well writen to the point poem. i loved it so but i must say i enjoyed the read and i hope the scissors and an imagery for a pen. i'd hate to cut all my good ideas out.LOL I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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