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Waiting...............
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Waiting............... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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The darkness in the sky The winds howling around The people do not have faces Nor are they making a sound The roses have turned black Their scent is all gone The sounds in the air Is that of a sad song So why am I here? Why do I seem to fit in? Is it something I have done? Is it that of my mortal sins? The darkness is overwhelming Everyone seems to have a tear No one is saying a word They all seem to live in fear I find myself a corner To just sit and wait For one day I shall get out Because I believe in fate.  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
DKW...(I love the suggestion of that name) I really enjoyed that one. Much feeling and expression of emotion. Keep going!!!! Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
its funny how dark poems can mean so much. if you place them in the right way and you do that great i love to read your work cause you seem to be from the same blood as i. both with a dark words express so much can't wait to read more from you keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Was it fate that brought you here, Brought you here to me? I'll join you in that corner, And I shall wait with thee. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, that was filled with dark thoughts, but still hope, because you keep waiting for things to be better. So do I. Still waiting... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful, dkw, and love the last two lines, really fits. Little hard to feel it's full depth, thought, with such a pretty smile right next to it. jwesley |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Fate is only one link in the chain of destiny. There is also hope and love. Glad to see you haven't lost any! Great piece I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well thanx everyone!!! And ummmmm Hardrock?? lol Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Wellllll.....I just didn't want you to be alone while you waited. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Okay Hardrock..... I am sure there is a seat for you also!  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
hey D.K.W. I'm feeling left out, and it be a threesome?? I want to wait to.  )I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
alienation pure. love it! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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