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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-07-01 04:16 PM




There is no love for me today,
your life has other plans
I'm so afraid you'll go away
and leave me where I stand.

Alone again, I wonder why
it has to be this way.
It hurts so much I want to cry.
Please take away this day.

I know next week you will be back,
at least I think you will.
Then my heart will be on track,
again I'll be fulfilled.

You're pulled away by her right now.
I'm left alone to mourn.
My eyes are dead, my head is bowed.
I sit here so forlorn.

I guess it's wrong to want you
though you mean so much to me.
There's just nothing I can do,
when your face is all I see.

So here I am, I sit and wait
for the tomorrow I hope will be.
And though I fear it could be too late,
someday we'll both be free.

© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-07-01 04:39 PM


One never knows Catalina, try hard to focus on some wonderful times ahead, because I know there will be some for you. Im holding your hand through this!! (((hugs))) Deborah1, I really enjoyed the poem....I just know that your sad
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-07-01 05:28 PM


Wow...very hard reading this. Hang in there, times will be better for you I know it. Don't give up.  
Rex
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
3 posted 2000-07-01 05:52 PM


A very compelling read. Nice work.

Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love?



Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-07-01 10:19 PM


a very wonderful read enjoyed it much and as always hope things start looking better for you. hang in there and keep writing.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-07-01 10:34 PM


Sandra....great poem.  Loved the structure and words.  As for the content.....sounds like you are really carrying a torch for this guy, but he's not yours to have at this point.  Frustrating....   Hardrock
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