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FJiznit
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 24


0 posted 2000-07-01 02:40 PM


This was written by a friend of mine.  

Standing by your
Graveside in winter
My tears they fall
And melt the snow
The sun it fades
On the horizon
Your grave now lit
By the glowing winter moon

Alone I stand in darkness
On this cold December night
I wish you were
Still with me
Instead of asleep
In your coffin bed
My tears they still fall
Sparkle in the winter moonlight
Time has frozen still
Forever winter



© Copyright 2000 Nick Barker - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-07-01 03:01 PM


FJ, a very sad poem. I know it is hard when we loss someone we care for though their spirit remains with us. a beautiful and touching tribute to your friend.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

demoninlove
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211
Dehradun
2 posted 2000-07-01 03:42 PM


Yes Dear Friend - It is Forever Winter!
I love this poem for the truth of emotion it stands for haunting us forever and ever.
Deepak Menon


Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-07-01 05:25 PM


Nice title, and I enjoyed this very much. I can understand those feelings, so sad
Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-07-01 10:16 PM


so very sad i hope your friend is ok and everything. this is a great piece i enjoyed all the emotion bulit inside the words very touching.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-07-01 10:41 PM


While the body may lie cold in the ground, it is remembrance that warms the spirit.  Tell your friend to visit us here in Dark Passions, where warmth is eternal.  Thanks for sharing, FJ.......Hardrock
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