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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-01 01:14 PM


I stretched my hand in longing
Out to you,
And you did but touch
My finger ends with yours...
A caress so light
It scarce was felt
Upon the hand,
But touched the heart itself
And left an imprint there
That time, in all its
Countless span
Cannot efface.


© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-07-01 04:54 PM


truely remembered forever great point and idea something can't ever be forgotten like your and my words as well as everyone else here loved the read as always and thanks for emailing me back.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-07-01 05:29 PM


A magical touch! I like this a lot.  
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-02 07:15 AM


Magical! I love your work!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-07-02 09:27 AM


~Oooh,...this is sooo nice.  A tiny little touch on the outside that turns into a great big huge touch in your heart....very nice.  Thanks for sharing. *Peace.
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-07-03 08:13 PM


Yes a feather brush to the fingers, can be deeply felt in the heart.

Love, light.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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