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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-07-01 09:43 AM





I am
The fog
That returns
The winter
You meet
Each afternoon
The eyes that
Find yours
At night


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


© Copyright 2000 uta waller - All Rights Reserved
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-07-01 11:04 AM


Hmmm... Uta.... a great poem!   A great expression of so much!  Makes one wonder!  
Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
2 posted 2000-07-01 12:39 PM


Good one Uta!  Great symbolism and expression of emotion.

Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love?


Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-01 04:49 PM


how i do love the expression you use as always this is another great piece from you so do keep it up please.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-07-01 05:34 PM


I love the vivid imagery in this poem! Excellent.  
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
5 posted 2000-07-18 12:54 PM


I agree, excellent imagery, very well written!!!
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 2000-07-18 01:16 PM


I ditto the above...liked it!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
7 posted 2000-07-18 01:30 PM


"The eyes that find yours at night"...wow, what a rush, Uta!!  Gave me those good kind of goosebumps.  I'll be reading this one several more times.  Hardrock
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