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taramw
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

0 posted 2000-07-01 07:13 AM

i see you spread your wings
i feel your tip brush my cheek
as you glide on past
flying free, sailing on the breeze.

~ Tara ~ (1.7.00)

** Even though it sounds like it, I am not talking about a bird!

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

1 posted 2000-07-01 07:21 AM

This lovely tara - feels light and free and airy.

(I would maybe say 'wing-tip' rather than 'tip' though. i don't exactly know what one's 'tip' would be!?)
Allan

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-07-01 08:47 AM

Hmmm.
A butterfly?
A plant?
A bit of a plant that flys?
A soul?
An idea?
Inspiration?
The mind boggles ...
Lovely poem, Tara, as usual!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-07-01 08:49 AM

I meant flies, of course!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-07-01 09:47 AM

And I also wanted the embarrassed smile. Ehem!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-07-01 11:01 AM

LOL!!! Uta! thank you for the laugh!!

I don't normally re-post in my own poem... but I couldn't resist!! Brightened my day!

Ta!

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

6 posted 2000-07-01 04:47 PM

what a wonderful piece it opens the mind up to all kind of ideas of which ones i'm not so sure of but the true meaning meant for you from you. and i hope to see it take flight whatever it is. but is at a love leaveing you if so thats rather sad.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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