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MY Dark Knight
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MY Dark Knight |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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My Dark Knight what would he be If I could wish three times three His hair soft and gentle to touch His eyes dark, loving and such His soul able to reach out and touch me His heart only I could see Strong hands make me tremble His winks always have a symbol Showing his love each day Telling me he loves me in every way This is what MY Dark Knight would be And in my dreams I can only see For this man is my destiny And only he has the key To my lonely heart and hopeful prayers Cause soon he will actually care To make me smile and show me the light Ahhhhhhh yeah... this is MY Dark Knight! Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
wonderful expression put here enjoyed the read very much and i hope one day you get everything you want. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ooh yeah, wouldn't that be nice?! Are there more than one Dark Knights?!!  Love your poem  |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW....I don't know how I missed this one the first go-round. But I did want to respond to it. So here goes: I’ll be your Dark Knight on my Harley, The one that you want to meet. I’ll ride by, when the sun is high, And scoop you right off of your feet. We’ll ride off into the distance, On that you can take all bids. Then rush back to get the darn wagon, We almost forgot all the kids. We got so caught up in our passion, We forgot we weren’t by ourselves. It’s time to hang up the armor, The Dark Knight will stay home with the elves. Loved it, kid. Your Dark Knight will come....when it's meant to be, it will happen. Hardrock |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Really a pretty piece, DKW. I bow to you. And I doubt there's a man around that wouldn't want to fill those shoes. jwesley |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwwwww thanks everyone! (blushing) I know someday I shall meet my Knight! And Hardrock..... thanx for that piece... it was GREAT!!! Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
wow. i guess i was my ex girls dark night. i was everything you said here and more. makes ya wonder that when people meet the man of there dreamz why they push them away. guess i will never. like i have always said true beauty is often hidden in darkness, like with me. once you look threw the dark past into the soul of this man you will see that underneth lurks a man of love, a very shy, broken angel who might never fly again. all dressed in black with my duster and guitar by my side, roaming down the highways for a princess to take away my pain. will we ever find our dreamz?? only god knows. but one day someone will see how beautiful our darkness is and take our hearts forever. but untill then you always got me, and the rest of passions. just e-mail me or any of us and were there. great poem by the way. sorry about the speech but i had to get it off my chest Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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