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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
In breathing there, you cultivate a fatal touch, a numb embrace you never breathe, you never wait for them or me, or anyplace. You lie and watch, they come and go still and quiet, the air is dead when you say stop, the wind doesn't blow tell me, tell me, which fire is fed? lying still, lying tongue that speaks, and everything is won the palace you have built of the dead, tell me, tell me what you said "Suicides have already betrayed the body. Still born, they don't always die, bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet that even children would |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I liked this, very emotional and powerful. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Chibi...Domo....domo origato....I really enjoyed this. Great style, imagery. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i enjoyed this very much and i hope to see more of you real soon so keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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