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sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2000-06-30 02:55 PM

A MOMENT IN ETERNITY:

Taken further
Sometimes ashamed
Who are we to judge?

Time and time again
We've seen
You accept regardless

But a precious moment
For a while shared
Gracious, taken
For hearts were bared

Recognise it's special
For another might not come
Once in eternity
Though keeping strength; young

Walk the way, this road is long
But you, arriving, know you're strong.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-06-30 08:49 PM

Sylvia....I love your style of writing, your use of words. More....more. Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-07-01 01:33 AM

i rather enjoyed this read alot every much said in a few words and i feel what you mean. thanks for posting it and keep it up

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-07-02 03:36 PM

This was a wonderful expression of time to me, has alot of meaning, I enjoyed this very much

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-07-02 05:02 PM

Hi Sylvia, I liked it too. So true, the precious moments are gone so soon, and you never know when there will be another.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-07-02 09:37 PM

So true!! Live each day like it is your last, make the most of all special moments.
For friends, loved ones, experiences etc can be fleeting...
Great work!!

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2000-07-02 10:46 PM

Ditto all the above responses...particularly Isis.

jwesley

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

7 posted 2000-07-03 09:18 PM

Yes it is a very precious moment in time when the heart are bared.
love this one kid.

Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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