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allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road

0 posted 2000-06-30 12:44 PM


I sleep and I work
What kind of a life is that?
A life before death



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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-06-30 01:19 PM


Oh allan, you poor thing! I'm afraid there are many who do that in this day and age, but remember that you, at least, write brilliant poetry too!  
(although you usually don't post it here, at least not since I've been around   )
Or did you mean that you are in love with your work and work is life and sleep is death?  


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


allan
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Posts 620
On the road
2 posted 2000-06-30 01:51 PM


lol

i am only depressed. (but it is becoming a habit...)

  

PS 'Just been to your site - I see we are both celts living in a Germanic world! (Me Scot - in Austria - since '97 or so) 'Lovely site - one of the best formats I've seen (envy envy...)

  




[This message has been edited by allan (edited 06-30-2000).]

Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-06-30 03:36 PM


Oh Allan, you might be surprised at how often I have heard those words which have alot of meaning....It was worth writing, Im glad you did!!!! Im pretty new here and I love this site, keep writing!!  
Jeremiah Johnson
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-07-01 12:44 PM


yes please do keep writing. i enjoyed this very much few words with alot of meaning powerful stuff keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

5 posted 2000-07-06 10:46 AM


~Damn good haiku you. hehe. Oh, and what a subject. Take care. *Peace.
demoninlove
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Dehradun
6 posted 2000-07-06 10:54 AM


Nicely Put - A hell of a life!
Deepak


kaile
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singapore
7 posted 2000-07-14 12:10 PM


this is exactly the same question which i would ask myself sometimes i guess most of us will feel this unfulfillment one way or another at some point of time
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