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fantasyhoneybabe
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-06-30 02:33 AM


Goodbyes are real hard to say ,
Especially when you are going away

Stammerings are always in the way
When you are stuck up thinking what to say .

Don't be sad and just relax ,
Coz the things you will say will be over in a sec .

Whatever comes gonna be alright ,
Coz they are gonna support you ,

You know ,
In whatever is right !!!


Fantasyhoneybabe
30/6/00

Love Yah !!! Peace !!!


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Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
1 posted 2000-06-30 05:59 PM


Cool....I liked the way it flows..

Click



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-06-30 06:50 PM


Cool goodbye/inspirational poem here.  Good work!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-01 01:13 AM


goodbyes are so hard to say at times but it makes the return even greater. i guess its a slight repercussion of itself. enjoyed the read very much as i do all your poems keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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