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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-06-29 08:01 PM


I hold my heart out to you
but it's like no one is there.
I want to give you everything
but you don't seem to care.
You only continue to play games with me,
ripping my heart apart.
The words you say are killing me.
They're words that you should have said from the start.
Still you tell me that you love me
but I guess it's not enough for you to stay.
You tell me "this ain't good-bye"
"we'll be back together someday".
"your not ready to be tied down
or to push other girls away".
Now I'm left to wonder as I sit and think
maybe you fell out of love with me today.
I haven't talked  to you,
you haven't called or been on-line.
I miss you and im upset but really can't be mad
because I can't help but remember your no longer mine.
I love you so much and I don't know what to do
but hold my pillow tight as tears fall from my eye.
I'll go to church on sunday
and pray my heart out that this really ain't good-bye.


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Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might have,
and should have.
--Louis Boone



[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 06-29-2000).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2000-06-30 12:26 PM


This is really good. . .and it's nice to see you again, it's been a while. . .

Superb. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-30 12:36 PM


i've never read any of your work before but i plan to from now on i enjoyed this read very much thank you.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
3 posted 2000-06-30 03:50 PM


Thanx guyz  

nice to see you again to sven,  it's been to long.

thanx jeremia...pssss....are you really a romantic??? lol

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