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Cold and Alone |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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As my cold fral body stands alone Lost in dectiful hopelessness As a passionate dead hope of life Still scarys my soul Cause I know that I shall always be A meer life of pain -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
good job. i hope things get better for you Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
love the expression you use so sadding yet so bright to your own extent. enjoyed the read and i voted for it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Thank you. Everyone has to exprese themseleves somehow. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Goodness, that is quite sad. I'm not too sure what to say except that I feel for you and hope that things get brighter. This was a well written poem, I think it read how the message was supposed to sound. Please take care. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beisdes one or two typos it was a really great poem. As this is not Crit. I am not going to point them out. but anyway really enjoyed the poem. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
No life is mere, it is up to you what you make of it!! Cheer up hon, draw some strength and get out there.. *hugs*  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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