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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-29 05:52 PM


Expensive Medicare,
children on Welfare,
people dying,
hungry babies crying,
what has the world come to?

Sell your soul,
make some cash,
kill your kids,
just make sure the stock market doesn't crash.

Monetary units are scarce these days,
live for money,
work your lives away,
government make sure only the innocent ones pay.

Elderly with no clothes,
women working being hoes,
Jerry Springer make 10 million to laugh as the world is broken,
what has the world come to?


© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-06-29 06:47 PM


We'er not on the eve of destruction yet....but we are headed there unless someone turns this juggernaut around.  Hopefully your poem will make people think.  Nice job, Angel.    Hardrock
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-06-29 08:56 PM


~Oh I always think of these things. You have written this so well.  Certainly a thought provoking poem.  Thanks for sharing it and it's message. Take care. *Peace.
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-06-29 09:54 PM


How I wish there wasn't truth in what you say, but it is so true, unfair and painful. Very well written, I enjoyed reading it. I have an elderly mom, so I see alot of unjust things in society.
LuckyinLove
Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57
Australia
4 posted 2000-06-29 11:44 PM


Yeah, thats all the bad stuff, so lucky we have some good stuff too, I love the way you write, can't wait to read more

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-06-30 02:02 AM


so true so very true and sad but see i'm trying my best to change the world and people ideas through my words and my writings of poems, books, and songs. i helping out but it will take alot more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
6 posted 2000-06-30 11:19 AM


My words exactly. I ask myself these questions everyday. Nothing makes sense, does it? I often wonder, if I have children - how will I explain the contradictions of modern society. A great poem here.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
7 posted 2000-06-30 12:50 PM


Very well said. I agree 100%!

Rex
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
8 posted 2000-06-30 02:28 PM


How sad and how true! Even sadder is the fact that we have no one to blame but ourselves.  Excellent job!!

Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability of love?

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