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amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

0 posted 2000-06-29 03:26 PM


There is a cold war between us
So don't make anymore fuss
Feeling shared and lost to dogs
Trying again is all in vain

Sincerely
A_L

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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-06-29 03:52 PM


A_L....that's cold, really cold.  But said so eloquently.  Good, very good.  Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
2 posted 2000-06-30 12:10 PM


i feel chill's do you? i hope not this is mean but not so if this person asked for it and i say give it to um good.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-06-30 03:54 AM


curious, luvie---who's got the cold?
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-06-30 10:47 AM


I think I know what you mean. Too much has happened, too many things have been said .. Great work!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


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