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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Once again you drive me to the point of insanity with my desire for you. Once again you force me to feel what I feel. You won't be denied. Once again you say my name with such passion and longing I disintegrate with need. Once again, I am here and you are there. And its cruel and it hurts. Once again I tell myself this could be a mistake, you are not free to love. And once I again I don't listen.... |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
catalinamoon, Your poem is alot like mine. Much pain in the love like this. I understand 100%. Keep up the good work. I really enjoy reading your work. Love Keeps the World Smiling LarBear |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Unknown love must be in the air these days. Nice writing Friend. We each desire many things in life and love. Sad thing is.... many things are unreachable. Yet if we give up the fight on what we want.... we end up with "nothing." So keep fighting for ur dreams and hopes. Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I think we all understand you can't have a little pleasure without a little pain. I feel ya girl! "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
It makes me think I wish I had a magic wand, I would make your wish come true!! Very Nice, spoken from your heart!! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
facts so greatly expressed here. loved the piece and i hope that you listen real soon and don't get hurt. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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