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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


0 posted 06-29-2000 11:50 AM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

I touch you through
the screen,
you touch me through
the phone.
We touch eachother
with our minds.
Virtual reality.
Nothing virtuous
about it...
© Copyright 2000 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 03-21-2000
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Kansas


1 posted 06-29-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Dark_kisses_Within   Email Dark_kisses_Within   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark_kisses_Within's Home Page   View IP for Dark_kisses_Within

Been there , done that also.  Puter relationships are very difficult.  Especially through the hard times in ur life.  Bare with it.... "heck" things might turn in ur directions.  
Keep ur head up and always smile! ( what do they say.... a smile is worth a thousand words)

Great poem too!!  

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

LarBear
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since 06-23-2000
Posts 139
Kingston, New York


2 posted 06-29-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for LarBear   Email LarBear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LarBear

Hmmmm,

I guess so.
I used to do that, but I am now afraid I will catch a virus.
You just never know.

LarBear
Hardrock
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since 02-14-2000
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New Hampshire, USA


3 posted 06-29-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

So true, so true Cat....'puter romances are so distant, cold, the only warmth being from the breezes blown off your CPU.  Another fine work from the Cat.   Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 06-08-2000
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Brooksville, Fl, U.S


4 posted 06-29-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Jeremiah Johnson   Email Jeremiah Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremiah Johnson

oh yes the way you express things is so great i love your work and read all of it so do keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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5 posted 11-30-2001 02:14 PM       View Profile for !!!   Email !!!   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for !!!

very well written
Irish Rose
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6 posted 11-30-2001 03:26 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

yes, this is well, true in many cases ....

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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