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Other Than The Fact
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Other Than The Fact |
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LenMcC1 Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 68 |
Other Than The Fact She’s running through the forest Each step is so small Sometimes she will fall And no one is there to pick her up Especially not me Why would I be? I haven’t loved her for years Nobody has Nobody will When someone throws everything Back in your face Love is something that leaves What a disgrace What a joke her life is C’mon, could anyone ever live like her? With her sycophant friends And little white pills Always dressed to kill Don’t forget those Friday nights When the all hot young Spanish boys Better look out or they’ll become a toy as well She is the only one of us who never puts on a disguise But maybe she should sometimes But she was never known for being wise How she was raised I don’t know But what kind of life could produce Someone like her I can only imagine how her parents were Maybe though sometimes someone is destined To be evil from birth, blame can be only pointed at her Who is she to yell and scream While on the ground being raped People always get what’s deserved That is someone’s philosophy To me it’s **** I just like to see anything entertaining And watching one of my enemies Treated like a jungle beast Is certainly disengaging |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
very well written... and very full of emotions.. great work. -if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.- |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sounds like she's on a path to self destruction, Li-Li. Maybe she needs an invitation to Dark Passions.....sure keeps me off the streets at night. Nice job.....Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Indeed,....this type of lifestyle is destined for doom. I've seen too many live it out. Anyway,...back to the poem which I think has so much more to it. Your words exude so much feeling. It's really incredible how much I can feel this poem. Very well done. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How many are swept away by the gutter life, and never make it back. You said alot here, I could see a picture in my mind. good Job!!!! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this seems to be my very lifestyle and i don't think thats good cause inside my mind and soul i'm evil but my heart is made of gold so i think i have to make a few changes in the meantime. enjoyed the read very much. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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