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AnGeLiX17
Junior Member

since 2000-06-05

Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-06-28 10:26 PM

I feel your pain,
I catch your drift,
you've gone insane,
with the horses run so swift.

Sadness knocks at your door,
and she's lookin to score,
you let her in,
suddenly you've been bathed in what you fear most,
sin.

Your life is now a literal nightmare,
you can't sleep in fear she will come back,
your insomnia grows stronger with each passing hour,
soon your soul she will completely devour.

This mistress of darkness, this goddess of despair,
doesn't matter where you look now,
she's always right there,
watching you, stalking you, hearing you breathe,
oh I couldn't think how those beautiful eyes would decieve.

As she draws closer to you she smiles that cold unforgiving grin,
her cloak wraps around you like bread to a basket,
it sucks you right in,
right into your casket.

Welcome to insanity.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2000-06-29 06:06 AM

Kick ass poem Kristi!!!! Umm...wait...can I say that? lol Keep it up girly! I'll see ya when I get back from Arizona. *hugglez* Wuv ya!

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Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't.

~*Angel of Darkness*~

[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-29-2000).]

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-06-29 06:18 AM

wow! powerful poem. And about one of my fav subjects! I am impressed!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-29 11:18 PM

yes tuely a great poem. enjoyed the read very much thanks for posting it. can't wait to read more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

4 posted 2000-06-29 11:24 PM

"sadness knocks on your door,
she's lookin to score", I loved it I like your style, I want to go read all your poems now, cool.

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